sapna to sab rakhte hai udne ka,
sapna to sab rakhte hai aasman ko chune ka,
par pura koi koi kar pata.
kyun aisa kyun koi hi spna kyun dekh sakta,
menat aur kismat do pehlu har koi rakhta.
par mehnat jo ajmata , vo kyun har jata,
kyun achi kismat vala aage nikal jata.
isse to jo mehnat vale ko aata vo bhi bhul jata.
sab kehte hai ptu hai bache jo hota vahi dikhlata,
par isse to mehnat krne vala hi thokar khata.
12th ki badkismat k baad sb ptu vale sochte hai college me dikhayenge dhamaal,
par yaha aakr dekha k sab kismat pe hi maalamal.
kya kar skte hai jab yeh hi hai haal,
ab to na koi mehnat aur na koi dhmaal,
sab kismat pe hi meharbaan.
Saturday, October 3, 2009
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very nice....sara gussa ptu par nikala hai...gud creation////
ReplyDeletecool...
ReplyDeletequite innovative...
good try.....
ReplyDeletework more on it....
ur poem iz gud.........but i hav little suggestion 4 u..dat dont limit ur thoughts on a particular subject.....bcoz d poem shud have a large area for itz influence.......dat relates to all people......kahani lokaan nu ohi changi lagdi hai jo.....ohna di hadd-beeti howe.......
ReplyDeletemera matlab tum samj gayi na.........
ya i got dat...bt it had relation wid me 2....
ReplyDeletejust visited your blog !!
ReplyDeletenice one I must say !!!
The poem too is gud but isko aur bada karo if u can,
it will simply be more awesum then !!!
will keep reading !!
Happy Blogging !!
Ankit
http://www.animageofshadow.blogspot.com